Entry: A sonnet in vain - In twain. Wednesday, May 19, 2004



Wonder when your soothing words
Began to abuse and reverberate.
Wonder when your silken touch
Began to poke and humiliate.


Straining to hear you whisper
Whilst you scream in my ear

Dawns the sepulchral finality of it all

An avowal that is oh so severe.

 

In twain we have sadly split

Asunder and in abject defeat

Nothing separates the two of us

Pity the twain shall never meet.

 

If this is all there is to you and I,

How can I blame all that I’ve let go by ?

   20 comments

mrudul
February 9, 2005   03:36 PM PST
 
hi sweetie, long time no see. loved this one... catch ya later!!!!
missed u
Ewe
May 21, 2004   01:40 PM PDT
 
Adt - !!!!!!!!! With open arms, babe :).

Deepan - LOL. I don't seem to have much choice there. Or should I say, too many choices ? Wherever I go, there's nicotine abuse and I'm mucho forced to inhale, thankee kindly :).

Geezer - HELLOOOOOOOOO !! Nopes, this isn't a rant. It's just something I wrote :).
BG
May 21, 2004   01:22 PM PDT
 
Now now, I thot we were getting out of this, but it doesnt go that easy, mebbe .....BG
Deepan
May 20, 2004   05:38 PM PDT
 
You wrote this ?? what do you smoke these days ? :)
ADT
May 20, 2004   04:47 PM PDT
 
sister... cousins... somethin.. there is some definite connection here... coz me too absolutely loves (and Osty will stand guarantee to this) curd rice.. can have it 24 X 7 X 365... just curd rice and pickles.. that is culinary heaven for me...
plus the sea... love that as well... theres is somethin bout it that just gives me so much of peace and serenity.. its unbelievable... will do a post on my thoughts bout the sea tom.. think u will identify with it.. ;)
ADT
May 20, 2004   03:42 PM PDT
 
like someone in my family says... "dont worry madko beda darlin"... u come here soon.. savin up on hugss for ya. :X
Ewe
May 20, 2004   01:33 PM PDT
 
Toro - Mera sms kya? Le abhi bhejti.

Alien - Innit :-) ??

Enigma - :))))) you and I can never get tired of professing our love for each other.

Palloo - Thunkoo :-).

Manu - LOL.

Priyanka - Likewise with ALL that you write, beautiful :-).

Elysia - Yepsy daisy. We meet ??
Elysia
May 20, 2004   10:40 AM PDT
 
Ewie is coming to bombay. :D.
Priyanka
May 20, 2004   12:44 AM PDT
 
You ve put into words my emotions precisely....I empathise with what u wrote here...beautiful!!:)
Manu
May 19, 2004   09:26 PM PDT
 
feelings feelings ;) lol
pallavi
May 19, 2004   08:47 PM PDT
 
SIGH !! this mkes me look backward into the past I rather not reflect.. nice composition
Cynic In Wonderland
May 19, 2004   07:58 PM PDT
 
Helloa ye bombay comer ..i am out from saturday till monday probabaly ..forgot the dates !
enigma
May 19, 2004   07:05 PM PDT
 
All I can say is WOW. I am mesmerized by your words sweet darling. And I love you for being you.
Alien
May 19, 2004   04:26 PM PDT
 
:-).... SO TRUE
Toro
May 19, 2004   04:19 PM PDT
 
The sent Msg was lost on recepient.
Please reformat and resend.

BHC, Blogdom
Ewe
May 19, 2004   04:16 PM PDT
 
Apple - Thunkoo baby :).

Mitthoo - LOL. Bring me back to earth.

Honky - Lots of people. Those many that I've lost along the way to silly spats and misunderstandings.

And then again, no one in particular :-).
Honk
May 19, 2004   03:39 PM PDT
 
who is this addressed to? ;-)
amit
May 19, 2004   03:22 PM PDT
 
too verbose... me had to use a dictionary to get it's meaning ...but got it in the end ...
"How can I blame all that I’ve let go by ?"
Apple
May 19, 2004   03:08 PM PDT
 
Same here, love.. Sometimes I love YOU so much that it hurts...

Soul stirring is the word, Ewie! And I'm really not copying you.. :)
Ewe
May 19, 2004   02:38 PM PDT
 
Sometimes I love myself so much, it hurts.

Reading this is one of those times *grin*.

Pun intended. Take it BOTH ways.

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